Jaxon Mase March 21

Today in class we left comments on our essays that we have been working on for a long time. We based these comments based of the rubric provided. The sections included organization, writing style, citation, content, and presentation. First we were split into 5 groups and we went up to the boards to write what would be effective in these sections and what would not effective. Each student for the rest of class would go through their essay and find an example of each section of the rubric that was effective and one that was not effective. I found in my essay it was awkward for me to be critical of my own work but it was very helpful to be hard on myself. These comments helped me be more honest about my work and doing this can hekp a student improve their work substantially.